08-11-2011,07:23 PM
Chillmoon,
Glad to see you have posted up your swing. The camera is sooo far away but I am able to see a bunch of things I would start to work on.
#1 Address
I would definitely take more a conventional address with your upper body. Here is a picture that should be quite obvious as to what may be a better approach for your set up

#2 Backswing
In spite of how erect your upper body is at address, you make a very pronounced upward movement of the upper trunk on the backswing which is definitely effecting the overall upward and downward movement of the club through out the swing. I would add a sensation of of your chest facing down on the backswing along with shrinking the right side of your body on the backswing.
Those are the 2 items I can see, other ideas are a bit too far away for me to make a judgement on.
Michael Jacobs
PGA TEACHER OF THE YEAR
2012 Metropolitan Section